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kaile
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0 posted 2003-09-19 01:32 PM


Fate struck our match
Winds of dissonance blew it
We--not meant to be

[This message has been edited by kaile (09-19-2003 01:46 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-19 01:40 PM


ooh
fate
a cruel blowtorch

good to write it out

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2 posted 2003-09-19 01:48 PM


hey thanks Kacy, but luckily this isn't autobiographical...i was just having to strike a match for my gas stove just now (the gas company isn't quite doing its job!)and this kinda popped into my head
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3 posted 2003-09-19 07:13 PM


In that case, POOF! to the gas company. LOL, you are too funny!
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4 posted 2003-09-20 01:34 PM


kaile ~

I read your reply to Kacy. Is it not surprising sometimes where our inspiration to write poetry can come from? lol

'Cooool' write!


EA


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5 posted 2003-09-20 02:49 PM




(sigh) Your origins of inspiration and versatility is joyous to behold, sweet friend, we all send angel hugs your way and wish for this void to be filled real soon! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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