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jellybeans
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0 posted 2003-09-19 01:16 PM

They ran and hid;
they ran and huddled.
A pursuit followed and
with a metaphor
and an alarming alliteration
I corralled them
into a questionable poetic forum
but alas
before I could get them
lasso’d onto paper
they slipped blithely
between the lines.

From the other side
they taunt
and scamper
through the flat lands
that possess the area
just before the trees take over.
Softly they call back
whispering that they
just might
be worth the effort
it would take
to go and get them.

But I let them leave,
and with a poet’s sigh,
close the gate
sealing them into obscurity.
There will be another day
when my fences
will be full of words
chomping at the bit
just waiting to be
written.

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (09-19-2003 01:43 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2003-09-19 01:29 PM

Dang good thoughts and write.
Get that corral gate closed and give us more, please.

EvocativeVerse2
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2 posted 2003-09-19 01:36 PM

Amazing poem. Just wonderful. Loved it!

jellybeans
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3 posted 2003-09-19 01:53 PM

thanks both of you *smile*
and now I am out of here, after a week from hell, I deserve the heaven of a quiet afternoon, just me and my pillow....

Sunshine

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4 posted 2003-09-19 02:29 PM

Now you know
where
I am
Without
came from...

my words
were teasing
your words...

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-09-19 02:40 PM

This is good.

Crystal

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6 posted 2003-09-19 04:39 PM

Yeppers... when you quit chasing them, the critters often sneak up and crawl into your lap. LOL

I enjoyed this very much! *S*

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7 posted 2006-06-08 03:49 PM

Because some dear friends are gone too long and should come home and *gift* us with words~

Hoping you will my dear lady~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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