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A Cist
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A Cist |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Cist I mist the sly of rhyming rhyme To cist the fungi, changing time. And in the spirit of the ghost I raise my glass and give you toast. May each feral have its moment Yet smell the fragrance of a rose And with each sniff, cry lament And feel the thorn to pierce its nose. I cannot change the human clan Nor can I change the span of man It has been tried with stone and bone And both were left in dust and flown I can but say, if asked to say I would that man another way I’ve seen the beauty of the garden And cannot see a worldly pardon I’d give my life if I were able What once was gifted in a stable |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How tender the thoughts, Sy... when we reduce it all to what is most real, and truly all important... we easily become quite humble. Bless you. Good morning...  |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
How humble and beautiful these words. Many thanks for sharing your thoughtful words of poetry. Bon-Bon  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love.  Bonnie, Thank you for the read and reply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can but say, if asked to say I would that man another way I’ve seen the beauty of the garden And cannot see a worldly pardon I’d give my life if I were able What once was gifted in a stable What a beautiful read to begin my day. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely the sound of spiritual music...wonderfully expressed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, my dear T-Man! Who would have thought a poem entitled "cist" could be so lovely... Your wife, Isabel, has been whipping up quite a storm I see! For our sakes, please appease her! I wish you well when she returns to your bed! lol  EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, yes dear Seymour. Quiet words to ponder this rainy morn. Thankyou for this. Enchantress been by with the tea yet? I have blueberry muffins to-day. hugs, Chris 
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You are a love. LeeJ Thank you my dear. Earth Angel, I will do what I can, thank you sweet. Chris, Not yet but soon, thank you love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I cannot change the human clan Nor can I change the span of man It has been tried with stone and bone And both were left in dust and flown I can but say, if asked to say I would that man another way I’ve seen the beauty of the garden And cannot see a worldly pardon I’d give my life if I were able What once was gifted in a stable ================================= your humility is always at the heart of your poetry...that closing couplet says it all.... and? it gets you extra winkies LOL  "If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
As always..something to look forward to each morning.. Susan  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, How many extra winkies? WWRS Susan, My pleasure, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A whole lotta winkies me sweet Stinky... or at least as many as Ron allows.. lol |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and heres some twinkies too just for Randy and you. LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I can but say, if asked to say I would that man another way I’ve seen the beauty of the garden And cannot see a worldly pardon I’d give my life if I were able What once was gifted in a stable Seymour, this is so very sweet. You are so very sweet!!  Hugs to you, my friend Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Good morning Sy.This is my first read this morning and I'm glad I chose you.The words are sweet, beautiful, and humbling.Which are all qualities that you posess. Crystal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, OK you win I just over dosed on twinkies Ethel Only alowed five so I send you hugs. Crystal, And some hugs to you too. |
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