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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-18 05:20 PM

Flat batteries
emptied ears

and I
was alone
with myself
to manage
brain unaided

Why now
does music leave me
in weakest
most feeble hour?

This crammed vehicle
carries sweaty souls

~faint~

Oh
open the window
in this humid jam

Captured in hurry for home
impatient limbs shift
with audible hum of engine

Seperating you
from these times
is scientific impossibility

War won
overriding self chatter
dig upon skull
squeeze into weary spaces
you don't fit

Not today
please, not today
but
you've alredy sunk my shallow
breath
to drought

Until tomorrow
I re live
throb of chest
distressed reconstructions
in mind
of how you left
me
in
this
jam
with no wheels
and no passenger
for company
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2003-09-18 06:34 PM

Emotions crammed in like sardines. Nice...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-09-18 06:39 PM

Your self-chatter is interesting to read! It just spills out of you and down the page!

loveya!
LL

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2003-09-18 06:42 PM

ooh, doesn't it just tick you right off when your batteries die? At least you got a good write out of it *hugs*

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-18 10:53 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, I'm so sorry to hear this bus broke down, dearest friend, I'd be happy to give you a lift in the Rainbow Bus and get you to where you need to go, as we all send angel hugs of comfort your way! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-09-18 11:52 PM

You're amazing, Gem, you know that?

Library.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-09-19 12:37 PM

damn gem i know this..for me it's the 36

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

7 posted 2003-09-19 01:29 AM

wow, i am speechless...adding

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-09-19 03:38 AM

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

9 posted 2003-09-19 09:06 PM

stupid M-6 ghetto bus..lol sorry..yeah think we can all relate to this..

really I need to lay off the gin

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

10 posted 2003-09-19 09:26 PM

this is a really great one. I think it goes in my library.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

11 posted 2003-09-19 09:45 PM

Gem, you know I like your interpretation of things and this is no exception.

Crystal

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