Open Poetry #28 |
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This to YOU |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) ![]() |
Four ways to look at you such beauty can this be true a blonde bombshell in blue looking at you know who I wonder what is behind those eyes what thoughts start to tantalize as they form from thoughts to actions could I be one of the possible satisfactions Friends I know are not supposed to play toe to toe but I look at those lips and that smile my thoughts start to run wild I fantasize about the pecs oh I could end up a wreck think about that Bottle it becomes hard to slow my throttle Your wise in your words the pictures you add only throw more curves your eyes visualize things others can not comprehend Only those to weak to understand would complain and whine your poetry is as beautiful as the picture on my screen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why Thomas, one would think you've found a passion... ![]() Very cute write... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific penning,, very good thoughts... |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I have PASSION for all that love to write and fear not to express their best and unique style. Lucky for me I don't have to name all my favorite writers. That could take awhile and I would have to explain why.. So I will just be a Rogue and smile. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...the last four lines say a lot...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We could call Passions "stirring pages" and your words confirm how deeply sometimes we are touched. Very lovely. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....what a naughty boy was that..... Nicely said, mon....a very pleasant poem for a morning when I'm an isolani. I've had these exact thoughts, but never wrote 'em down! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thomas, this is so beautiful. Like you, I would hate to have to name all of my favorite writers here at Passions. Every one of them are special in their own way. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
All smiles here ![]() |
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