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Escape ...................Haiku
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Escape ...................Haiku |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Scrambling up the fence the milkweed is escaping in scatters of white. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...a pretty picture, this!  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This paints a gorgeous escape.  Crystal |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i'd rather be there than here...floods a comming "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ugh, your haiku.. they're all so good.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Enjoyed this, Ed...love the vision it creates in my head. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very pretty indeed. Maree  fate is not just |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, you certainly can paint the picture very clearly with your words.  Hugs (psssttt!! every time I click on one of your poems and see you standing beside that big fence, I think of your pet rat!! LOL Have you caught him yet? If not, I'll bet you've got him pretty well fattened up!! ahahahahaha!!!! LOL) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 the next Great Escape?enjoyed this snippet of nature |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Your words took me to a wide open green meadow, where what we called nature's puff balls, shower us like millions of feathers, tickling our nose and skin....lovely Good good morning and how are you doing today? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Long gone, the Monarch who coveted the sweet milk, who held it in thrall. OK that one doesn't work at all. Sorry. I enjoyed yours though.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ratleader - great write, a lot of thoughts here... BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful... your words are as effective as any photograph... I'm glad I got to view these escapees. *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL at Meghan's "ugh"... but you do have a way with your words, Sir... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah...freedom...it always has a cost doesn't it?...great poem |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Could feel the breeze against my face as I saw the puffy white take flight. Well done. TD |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ed, this is precious, sweet friend, I too envisioned the plants covering the fences like kudzu! (big hugggsssssss) Your imagery is a joy to envision, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wanna thank everybody, and especially Pilgrim..... You couldn't have known that I first wrote this as a Choka....and the other two lines had that fellow as their mainstay.... If they'd been as good as yours, I'd have kept them! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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