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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2003-08-06 04:19 PM

Tonight we part
Not with sweet sorrow
But days end friction

The air around us
C*H*A*R*G*E*D
With words best left
Unsaid

Our bed

The scene of another
Cold war experiences
No strain or creek
Of two in heat
For we have taken sides
Against the edge
Fledglings
Poised for leap
Though both know
Neither will go

My heart cries in
Stubborn silence~
One warm touch is
All it will take
To call a passionate
Truce

But you first,

You first...

~Tier

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-06 04:21 PM

Damn..this is amazing.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2003-08-06 04:23 PM

Thank you, Karou.

*smiles*

~Tier

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-08-06 05:42 PM

Ha..ha.."But you first"...that would require a softening of the heart...James

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-08-06 06:31 PM

Too bad all aren't like you. :'( I guess all are not as warm.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-06-2003 06:33 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-08-06 08:05 PM

Oh mannn . . . yes yes Tier
I think about this all the time
why so stubborn? why?
beautiful writing, friend
xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-08-06 08:12 PM

My heart cries in
Stubborn silence~
One warm touch is
All it will take
To call a passionate
Truce

But you first,

You first...

Tier, I try soooo hard not to be stubborn.....
But, sometimes, it's soooo hard not to be.....

Hugs

Ethel

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2003-08-06 10:06 PM

It's like bein' inside that mind for a bit...

So, glad your back!

Ed

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

8 posted 2003-08-07 12:19 PM

will I just get off with a *nod* and say I enjoyed this..I never do know what to say....

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

9 posted 2003-08-07 12:56 PM

Sometimes we should give in and let the stubborness subside.Well done here.
angelblueyes

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

10 posted 2003-08-07 03:42 PM

Thank you all, albeit belatedly, for taking the time to read this piece. I really do appreciate it.

*group hugs*

~Tier

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