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Open Poetry #28

Heart In Fragments

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-09-17 01:46 AM

In the infinite silence,
I hear your heart pulsing
with the fragments of my love.
The diamond-blue sky is falling.
I feel its pieces raining down
piercing the armor of the years.
Healing drops painting themselves
like frankincense and myrrh
upon my serrated soul. I
reach for the stars...inhaling
their effervescent radiance.
And, they are swaying
and dipping within the realms
of my sovereign spirit. Yet,
I hear your heart pulsing
again and again. Fragments
of your love whirling round,
dripping like rhinestone-tears
upon my broken-heart skies.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-09-17 02:35 AM

this sounds so vulnerable.. a little helpless, sad.. but so beautiful.
Really, beautiful.
Well done...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-09-17 08:22 AM

stunning read, the whole of it, every single word took you by the hand and felt your heart and soul's beliefs, feelings....very good write

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2003-09-17 08:25 AM

cool a so a original way to say your heart breaks

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-09-17 09:59 AM

I hear your heart pulsing
again and again. Fragments
of your love whirling round,
dripping like rhinestone-tears
upon my broken-heart skies.

Ivy, this is so pretty...even
if it's so sad.

Hugs

Ethel

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