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Open Poetry #28

Haiku ( My First )

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-16 11:51 PM

Shadows of the sun
leaves tears on the horizon,
fears of growing old.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-09-16 11:59 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh E.J, I believe we all have hese fears at some point of our lives, dearest friend, but know deep at heart the child in you will always live and shine! (sigh) We are forever young at heart, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-17 12:01 PM

This was good.Remember though no matter wether 20 or 100,if you have the spirit of the child within you will alwys have the heart of one.

Crystal

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-17 12:03 PM

Looks mighty good to me! Good job, my friend!

~ becky

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-09-17 12:04 PM

A beautiful haiku, froggy...nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-09-17 12:35 PM

Technically a senryu, I think (because of the human element)....but beautiful poetry. If your first is this good, I can't wait for the hundredth!

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froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2003-09-17 02:56 PM

Thank-you Noah for a sweet comment.:-)

Thank-you Crystal I'll remember that :-)

Thank-you Becky Took me several attempts to get the one I liked to put in here. :-)

Thank-you Vicky Hugs to you too. :-)

Thank-you Ratleader No promises I'll do more but will try. :-)

Hugs to each of you.

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