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Lotus Breeze
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0 posted 2003-09-16 07:24 PM


You give me flower
Red rose with sharp thorns long stem
I blush at taking
Pleased just to see you agin
I cherish moments,
You leave return unsaid when,
I pleased any time you spend


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1 posted 2003-09-16 07:34 PM



Very poignant...
extremely moving...

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2 posted 2003-09-16 07:36 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, yay, and may so many more special memories fill your heart like daisies in a chain, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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I can see the sun set and I perceive

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Lotus Breeze
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3 posted 2003-09-16 07:40 PM


You both kind,
Sunshine, I look up word “poignant”
I not know meaning, but feel you give good compliment

Noah, you sweet, make sharing pleasure, make writing more worth while

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4 posted 2003-09-16 08:25 PM


LotusBreeze~
You have such a gentle softness to your penning~
It gives me a peaceful feeling to read you.
Thank you for sharing~
*Huglets* (that's a tiny hug ... but big from heart)
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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