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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-16 03:15 PM



Within this box
you'll find all the little things
once mine.

You'll find a ring of gold
with stones marking each birth.


A locket of love you gave me,
always worn close to my heart.
Pages of letters tattered,torn
and burnt yet salvaged from the fire.

As you search you'll find
the words I left behind to be found at this
time.

Remember me as you search through this box
that once was mine, know I loved you
when I left this earth.

© Copyright 2003 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-09-16 03:58 PM


oh...what a precious box this is, full of treasured pieces of life. Beautiful ending, also, and brought tears to these eyes...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
2 posted 2003-09-16 08:22 PM


Thank-you Sunnyone.

Didn't mean to make you cry.

:-)

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3 posted 2003-09-16 08:58 PM




(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes because it is so beautiful and heartfelt! (smiles) May scrapbooks of loving memories be left for all your loved ones, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
4 posted 2003-09-16 09:27 PM


Thank-you Noah.

:-)

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
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5 posted 2003-09-17 11:06 AM


Love it mean and green. I see you figured out how to post a picture too. I know this picture. I have it saved! 8-) Keep up the work sweetie!
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

6 posted 2003-09-17 11:35 AM


I like this froggy, you captured suggestion with a flavor of longing and everlasting. Nice job.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
7 posted 2003-09-17 03:10 PM


Thank-you EvocativeVerse2 ( Shakespeare).Yes I did figure out how to post a picture.I have yours too,I promise to keep writing as long as you keep reading them. ;-) Hugs

Thank-you MysticPoe for such a wonderful comment. :-)

Hugs to all.

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