Stringing Up the Daisies..

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-16 02:46 AM

Times like these,
I wish
I could quit
writing down your bones.

Lost the feeling
of my skin bleeding.
Winter
has ended
in my veins.

You've melted
my snow
away.

Strumb,
strings ..I've watched you play.
Love darkens it's course in the scenery,
as though pulsating.
Through each finger placed
chord
that quakes the earth below it.

i hold that picture
as if punctured by rose..
enlightened by the pain
that beauty causes..

Touch, oh love,
for this heart aches..
in desperation we seek it..
we play it
as though broken string dreaming..
had coursed down barefoot against the tile..

I'm wounded by your silent expression,
your chiseled face, pointing downward..
Fingers in dance following
with black and white portrait..

I feel so faint.. watching..
your poetry aura movement increases..
Playing like a hyper cloud on
the playground in the sky..

You paint castles in the sand,
measurable supples of droplets crumble..

Play away
winter
in my vein..

Play old soul.. love again..
stringing up..
the daisies.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-16 02:52 AM

I'm wounded by your silent expression

a line that expresses feelings so well,,,

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-09-16 02:52 AM

Meghan...wow...I love this.
You've got some great lines in there.

For example, this...

"Times like these,
I wish
I could quit
writing down your bones."

And this...

"You paint castles in the sand,
measurable supples of droplets crumble..

Play away
winter
in my vein..

Play old soul.. love again..
stringing up..
the daisies."

Very cool stuff there...nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-16 03:09 AM

totally awesome!

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-16 12:15 PM

nice

KristieSue

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since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

5 posted 2003-09-16 12:28 PM

Play old soul.. love again..
stringing up..
the daisies.
~~~~~~~~~~~~

love it...

"Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-09-16 12:31 PM

Meg~

I believe this is my favorite...

holy crap...I am inspired!

Susan

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-09-16 03:26 PM

Excellent poem...powerfuly written!
Eric

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2003-09-16 03:59 PM

For an opposite view of this very thing, Kaoru, hunt down my old poem Acoustic guitar, wherever it may be. We think alike sometimes.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-09-16 10:04 PM

i hold that picture
as if punctured by rose..
enlightened by the pain
that beauty causes..

and pain causes beauty as in these words, imagaine if every day was sunny, what would we feel anymore?

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

10 posted 2003-09-16 11:01 PM

This is great.
Crystal

heartpiper
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since 2003-09-02

Posts 57

11 posted 2003-09-17 01:26 AM

"Love darkens it's course in the scenery,
as though pulsating.
Through each finger placed
chord
that quakes the earth below it."

This is an original Sonata of how love influences, exactly as deep as it sounds here

Thanx for the read

Iyad

"Hallow the body as a temple to comeliness and sanctify the heart as a sacrifice to love; love recompenses the adorers."
Khalil Gibran

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