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How Many Moons Have I ?
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How Many Moons Have I ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 How Many Moons Have I ? ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Tell me oh please, how many moons have I yet to phase across alluring nights of love I have peaked in the crescent knowing new love's on the rise I have basked in the knowing I am soon set to glowing with the love shining in your eyes~ And ... that's but the half of it~~I have risen so half-full to the specter of you Shrouded in mystery of the time we spent apart Glowed in full-measure of pure pleasure sent from bright glow of heart~ How many moons have I~ ~Again, you phase in the fullest of soon-rising orb of soft alabaster glow, wanting only that you should know - you catch me in your loving light and hold me in raptured shine of the night - fully extending rays of soft glow - spilling of such thrill seeps through my heart and my soul as to keep me in mesmerize reflected in another's eyes Waiting for soft expelled sighs that lay across a diamond sky in phases full of realize the glow of love~ And then ... there you glow again~~Rephasing of the many moons of me~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-06-2003 07:40 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I may never write a moon poem again...you've got it all covered with fabulous!  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very cool! A double shot of art! Susan C. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Not only were the words exquisite, so was the art... beautiful Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - you are just amazing.... BC |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...I remember this one, Marge. It's one of my favorites.  Hugs, ~Me "My friends are my estate." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, this is spectacular. This is the reason why you have earned the title of Lady Luna! Bright moonbeam hugs ... |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So creative. I love the way you dressed it up all pretty, and artsy. You deserve a hand for all the work.  Yet another treat for the eyes, and the heart! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Awesome in every way, Marge. So enjoyed! Patricia |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
This is very, very cool. Jason |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...This is exceptionally beautiful and exceptionally expressed. Beautiful imagery throughout this poem of a love reconstructed re-phased ***Ivy Rose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, WOW  |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Artistic work of poetic art. Exquisite! Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweet -- ekphrasis carried into an art form....nice work, Marge! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
 ~bjw~ ~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your many moons have always held a very special grace... |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Wow, how wonderful this is Much admired! Eliza Simmons |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this is awesome. I love it. Betty |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Marge, this is absolutely wonderful.You are a very talented poetess.I'm keeping this one. angelblueyes |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so romantic, breath taking |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely, very peaceful in my own way...  L~ The way you move me |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge Your poems about the moon always leave me in awe and this was no exception. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wondering how in the world you do this...shaking head |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This is excellent... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
mooned yet again... regards sudhir |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I lost count about four year back... but this is excellant dear sis. lucky dale |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I feel so fortunate to be in a forum that features your beautiful work. I don't want to miss any of it! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Marge, how magical. The moon itself inspired you to reach such heights! So lovely and original. Love, Margherita I'm off to find a moon picture here for you ...  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Very cool..and it cools me off. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Coming back in realize ... I had not thanked you all~ So ... I do~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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