Open Poetry #28 |
Confess My Sins |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Confess My Sins I walk the line as thin as hair and at the end wonder what is there at times I leave to spread my wings just to feel the ever tug of my strings and come back to another lesson to learn I expect this is my judgment as I yearn will life give me credit in relief another side to this story is my belief and to rebuild in timbers understand to replace one built upon the sand "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
and to rebuild in timbers understand to replace one built upon the sand aye thats the key, a solid foundation a solid framework..i've got my overalls and tool belt if you need a hand |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such depth here. Yes I believe we need to learn and to learn once again ... Love, Margherita |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
let him cast the first stone he that is among you without sin |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
lending an extra wing . . . I know those strings too I keep scissors in my pocket just in case I love this style on you Helen xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It's ok to build on the sand, really is...as long as you know what you're building, and why. It can even be an advantage in an earthquake zone like mine -- damps 'em out as well as anything there is, and never liquefies.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know, you are beautiful |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
I like to come back later and read you again. It is like the taste of fine, rich cheese . . . If your poetry is any indication, you get better with age. s.a.g. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, so beautiful! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
They say that confession is good for the soul! I do know this, your confession was good for those who read it! --and remember, if you build a new house out of timbers, make sure you don't build it right on the beach! lol EA |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
wow..just, wow.. |
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