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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-08-06 10:14 AM

Searching for the Plane…..

In the shadow of purple summer's night
I sense your touch, feel breath light,
thus comes to me calming memory,
a love I hold so dear, closely…

it was a night, such as this
when I held fast to your last kiss
stroked your brow, held your hand
and felt my heart in pain expand…

this space so void, this chasm so black
only in memory do I have you back,
two crystal goblets of wine I pour,
to drink to your memory ever more…

and as I taste this wine, bitter sweet,
night's summer warmness is replete
gently into its blackness I fall
as I search for you in crimson pall

for although your body is not near mine
I feel you there … through space and time,
there, on a plane, an unknown mystery
where your love I long to hold to me…

this life's long pursuit to not be denied
to re-kindle love, again be entwined
I will search, tho tears make eyes blind
there, on a plane, transparent as time

~*~

Revised from 2000

MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-08-06 10:55 AM

This beautiful write brings images of GHOST and WHAT DREAMS MAY COME... haunting in a separation of missing...

-MVS

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-08-06 11:02 AM

Sunshine
An exceptional write, a keeper.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

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Missouri

3 posted 2003-08-06 11:19 AM

Just beautiful K...in every way.

I love this ghostly love of whom you write.
But...
Forgive me today as I pray
for love it seems quite faraway.
I don't think I shall again land
in this foreign faraway land.

Love and Hugs,
Patricia

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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4 posted 2003-08-06 11:23 AM

sunshine, your poem is not only a keeper, but you are and will be to...someday...again...you will inhale a love as such...

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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5 posted 2003-08-06 11:46 AM

Karilea, you have just made me feel sane
thank you

this space so void, this chasm so black
only in memory do I have you back,

Ahhhh this has touched me so . . .
is beautiful
xxoo

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-08-06 12:06 PM

A beautiful sharing of your beautiful soul.

Loving hugs,
Linda

Martie

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7 posted 2003-08-06 12:36 PM

Karilea...I think if you stop searching so hard and just let go, you will open yourself up to this other plane more easily. The longing in this poem touches me.

KristieSue

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8 posted 2003-08-06 12:58 PM

Dreams...memories...are very special things and sometimes the glue that still hold us together.....

beautiful

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2003-08-06 01:48 PM

Haunting...sad and yet so beautiful.

Susan C.

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29

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10 posted 2003-08-06 05:06 PM

Beautiful, Karilea... This is going in my library.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

suthern

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11 posted 2003-08-06 05:09 PM

for although your body is not near mine
I feel you there … through space and time,
there, on a plane, an unknown mystery
where your love I long to hold to me…

this life's long pursuit to not be denied
to re-kindle love, again be entwined
I will search, tho tears make eyes blind
there, on a plane, transparent as time

Definitely a library one for me. *S* This is hauntingly beautiful... with an ache that seems so familiar. *S*

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-08-06 05:37 PM

A joy to read...one of my favorites...James

SharaRose
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13 posted 2003-08-06 05:56 PM

So sad, but a beauty as always. Lovely!!

SharaRose @-->--

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Janet Marie
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14 posted 2003-08-06 10:07 PM

and as I taste this wine, bitter sweet,
night's summer warmness is replete
gently into its blackness I fall
as I search for you in crimson pall

for although your body is not near mine
I feel you there … through space and time,
there, on a plane, an unknown mystery
where your love I long to hold to me…
=============================

Talk about rhymes divine...
( who was that, who said you "shouldnt rhyme")

beautiful verse of heart poetess of the sun.

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

garysgirl

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Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-08-07 02:24 AM

for although your body is not near mine
I feel you there … through space and time,
there, on a plane, an unknown mystery
where your love I long to hold to me…

this life's long pursuit to not be denied
to re-kindle love, again be entwined
I will search, tho tears make eyes blind
there, on a plane, transparent as time

Oh, Karilea, you must have known that I would
love this beautiful poem of love. It is soooo pretty.
I'm keeping this one.

Hugs, my friend

Ethel

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