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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-09-15 02:32 PM

Delicious moment’s layer, ever present now
Eros curls a nuance like large blue diamonds
Bending light to its core, long caravans of layers
Recoiling through evolution’s swallowing trails and trails
Merely signs of life’s engines which lays down its arms
Ripening an enormous treasury, where I speak my mind
Of days, weeks, hours swarming words loosened into the world
Going beyond superficial conventions into the unconscious
Undefeatable blocks, famously termed by the Gods
An axis unstoppable painting winged chairs
Imagining paintings of a lover in my empty room

And there, a golden whirlpool of summer sky and afternoons
Anxious days, of surprise and moisten air of perfume

Don’t leave me for dead, I’ve waited so so long
For you…don’t be afraid…or misconstrue
For the greater part of us stands imbued
All feelings core form the word, the idea and the dream
Misunderstanding is mistrust, please don’t be deceived?

Inside of you yesterdays regrets burn away

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-09-15 02:34 PM

thoughtful..and well done... it could easily be taken several ways to mean several things on different levels...

I enjoyed

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-15 10:00 PM

wonderful penning,,

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-09-15 10:29 PM

(sigh) Oh Lee, this is so very wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, you have already confronted heartache and you deserve true happiness forever and I wish for this person to forever make you feel comfortable and special! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2003-09-15 10:34 PM

I must agree with Cpat Hair: "thoughtful and well done. It could easily be taken several ways to mean several things on different levels." Very good writing!

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