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Our Taboo Love
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Our Taboo Love |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Our Taboo love. I left our farm to dwell in his mansion, a grand name for his quaint caravan pulled along by Jessie the stalwart grey cob. Shunned by my kinfolk. Banished from his Romany roots, we travelled our lonely way into the future. His seeds that I germinated were scattered carefully after many years of tender nurturing. Alone again, our days growing fewer we were happy to be clasped in out taboo love. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nicely written... I know something of taboo love... Susan C. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
His seeds that I germinated were scattered carefully after many years of tender nurturing. ========================= how cool and lovely is that verse. well done poet cusick  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Susan and Janet for your lovely comments Maggie |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is an interesting poem. It is very beautiful.  Hugs  Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Lovely. Sounds like lore. I love that!! I want someone to tell me stories of long ago. I don't think I ever grew up when it came to that. So sweet, and loving. So much SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Ethel and Shararose. Glag you enjoyed it Maggie |
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