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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-09-15 12:32 PM



Please tease me,
so I’ll know
I'm still alive.

Coax me back into life,
hoax me,
if you must.

But please tease me,
so I'll know
I'm not turning to rust.


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-15 12:36 PM




(smiles) This sounds passionate and serious at the same time, sweet friend, I believe we all need to be felt for so we know that our hearts are beating and we truly feel the grace of the world! (big hugggssssss) May your heart always find true solace and comfort, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

KristieSue
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2 posted 2003-09-15 12:38 PM


why do I have a feeling that is a DANGEROUS things to dare the men on this forum? LOL

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-09-15 12:45 PM


I'm no good at teasing.

but yer not rusty!!!! very much alive

loved this sensuous piece Kacy, it is so full of need and desire, i love it!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2003-09-15 01:04 PM


your poetry is alive with the shine of your soul....always....
ctowen
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5 posted 2003-09-15 03:27 PM


Rusty???


   LOL ... nothing a little tender loving care
      and some "3 in 1" oil on the cupboard hinges
      couldn't fix!!

            (and maybe an occassional ASH kicking)

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6 posted 2003-09-15 03:36 PM


Please tease me,
so I’ll know
I'm still alive.


Man, do I ever know this...
outstanding job.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-09-15 04:30 PM


Please Tease me
whoa yeah
like I Tease yoooouuuuuuu

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8 posted 2003-09-15 04:43 PM




  Tell me,
       is the heat
          in you
or is
        it
             the passing
                sun
beading  
    
some sweat
        from labor

I
      from you



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9 posted 2003-09-15 05:15 PM


Rusty?
Okay...how bout I call Rusty...
and you call Jerome?

You're alive and kickin' gal!
~Hugs YOU!~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2003-09-15 05:33 PM


Hey Kacy:  

Did you hear?  All of the world's politicians, religious zealots, and war-mongers got together and vacated the planet leaving it to the people who learned to stop hating and fearing each other and to work towards a common goal of respecting one another without judgement and healing the environment, planting trees instead of cutting them down, and abolishing obscene incomes and taking the left-over monies and disbursing them to education, the needy, and providing free health care, food, and shelter to the masses...  

How's that for a "tease"?  (I wish it weren't, believe me.)

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Midnitesun
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11 posted 2003-09-15 09:31 PM


Noah, it is both
Kristie, you do have them figured out
Gemma, its full of it, allright
THANKS LeeJ!
Craig, LOL, so that's what's wrong! I'm outta oil! I'm going shopping tomorrow
Ringo, LOL, glad you enjoyed and (?)related
Raph, you Beatle lover, you!
Ron, beads me. LOL, enjoyed that reply.
OMG, Nancy...you knew about Jerome?
And Mark, I love the way you tease. Sigh, if only....

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-15-2003 09:32 PM).]

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12 posted 2003-09-16 03:34 AM


but I'm a pleaser not a teaser and your so far away...
so if you'll only meet me half way we can have have a candle light dinner on top of the space needle while the lights of Seattle sparkle below.Following dinner a late summer moonlit beach stroll sharing secrets and tender touches along the way.A woodsy hillside cabin with a soothing wood fire and the fulfillment of both of our every desire.Finally the spruce and fir filtered sunrise followed by a long nap till noon...
Good morning Kacy,welcome to a new begining.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

[This message has been edited by bbent (09-16-2003 03:42 AM).]

Midnitesun
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13 posted 2003-09-16 10:20 AM


OH MY! Ray, how am I supposed to get any work done today after reading this reply????

Smiling, as this is the best tease me I've read yet!
Now, where IS that suitcase???

littlewing
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14 posted 2003-09-17 01:20 PM


Kacy:

rust never sleeps . . .
*smile*
xxoo

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15 posted 2003-09-17 08:00 PM




For Kacy


I’m gonna try and act in ways
that are not too pathetic
And try to coat your self esteem
by (Min)waxing poetic (!)

Your words are just as smooth as
no wax floors of new linoleum
But if your mettle’s tarnished
we could get you some Rustoleum

Your heart is made of solid gold
that all of us can trust
Your eyes are like two diamonds
both of which can never rust

There is no way that eyes like yours
that sparkle with delight
should ever fail to see how much
true passion they incite

That lovely smile and giving soul
mean more to us each day
Your selfless acts of kindness
that you do in your own way

You have a gentleness that shows
in everything you do
This place just wouldn’t be the same
without a girl like you


Richy



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16 posted 2003-09-17 08:15 PM


Well I'm one who always tries to help.Like when I tell people when they say, I have to go find myself I tell them to go look in the dryer.
Now let me see. Hummmmmm............
Go drink a coke they say that is good for rust.BUT.....Don't drink to much cause you may disappear.
OR
I could send alot of hugs your way from Ohio.
Love Bon-Bon

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17 posted 2003-09-17 09:29 PM


Sue and BonBon, THANKS!

and Richy? C'mere my big home state friend, for your cyber hug! It's so good to see you back on the board, ESPECIALLY when you post replies like this. What a wonderful heart you have.   

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-17-2003 09:31 PM).]

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18 posted 2003-09-17 10:51 PM


Kacy,  I will refrain from coaxing you into
something that should not be.....  Ya know
only you could come up with such a provocative
title....that all of us guys would normally
just jump on and you would certainly liven
up and the hinges would no longer squeak...

(applying 3 in 1 oil)......

There...better now??

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