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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-15 10:29 AM





Sweet Southern Moon

soft sweet
southern moon
gently I lie
within your spoon
tenderly here
you hold my heart
I am but half
you the other part
and walk in day
as just a ghost
where at night
we pull so close
silken whispers
across velvet sky
a single echo
in reply
then tripped on light
found it dawn
another night
forever gone

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-09-15 10:37 AM


Ah, but the memories...  linger on...

-MVS

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-09-15 10:39 AM


Yes, but you reunite every night and what sweet memories you share.
Crystal

EvocativeVerse2
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3 posted 2003-09-15 10:43 AM


Ahhh...love it! Well done.
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-09-15 10:45 AM


Wow ..I was left with a feeling of tenderness after reading this. Very nice from start to finish.

SharaRose @-->--

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