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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-09-14 09:44 PM




Hidden from curious eyes a
pond so tranquil
fed by a cool springs that
overflow into a rocky little
stream running through the
magical forest of dreams
here the cool waters trickle
mysteriously along carrying
nurishment of life to all
so i stand by this magical
stream and wish for my
dreams to come true that
I never be hurt again from
blind love

                               

© Copyright 2003 gMt - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-09-14 09:49 PM


This was so good. I felt the intensity, the serenity, and the passion in this.Keep writing strong my friend.
Crystal

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2 posted 2003-09-15 03:57 AM


magic, yes
Mystic One
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3 posted 2003-09-15 06:56 AM


Yes Nice
LeeJ
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4 posted 2003-09-15 07:29 AM


Well, honey, I'm standing right there with ya...can we hold hands, close our eyes and make the same wish together?????

Love is blind my dear...and always will be...
Remember, misunderstanding can lead to mistrust.  My breath of light for the day...smiles and hugs

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-09-15 11:13 AM


so i stand by this magical
stream and wish for my
dreams to come true that
I never be hurt again from
blind love


Oh Glenn, I do hope that you find the
love you are looking for.  
Hugs  
Ethel
(pssttt!! Thanks for the bump on my poem last night. They do get lost in the shuffle sometimes, don't they? This gets to be a really busy place sometimes!! LOL)

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-15-2003 11:13 AM).]

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-09-16 05:08 AM


You can hope...seems to me like love always involves a risk...James
vlraynes
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7 posted 2003-09-16 05:11 AM



"Hidden from curious eyes a
pond so tranquil
fed by a cool springs that
overflow into a rocky little
stream running through the
magical forest of dreams"


I want to BE there...just lovely, Glenn.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-09-16 09:25 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, your wish is destined to come true, as smooth as the flowing river as life, His lips will declare your wish coming true and love shall be yours to hold true forever! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, your poetry is a joy to behold, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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