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SharaRose
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0 posted 2003-09-14 06:12 PM


You Sir Are No Gent


Here I sit
with my circumspect
But to you it's no affect.
Be it as I may circumspect.
Still, you think with no respect.
Why must I be your suspect?
You say all I do is circumvent
all my time is not well spent.
When it comes to you
I relent, You sir
are no gent!

Virtues
you
say
I
don't
possess
Calling me a liar.
While conscience,
Yours is only by hire.
Putting me through
trials by fire.
And you say
Of me, you
tire?



© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-14 06:18 PM


well i guess you told him!!!


very good to get it out ain't it?

                            

Magnus
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2 posted 2003-09-14 07:23 PM


I am glad I am not HIM.....You certainly
gave it to him.  Nice write..

Kaoru
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3 posted 2003-09-14 07:46 PM


Very well done, m'lady.
JilGirl
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4 posted 2003-09-14 09:12 PM


Well said! Great format!

Strength of strength, girl!
Blessings to you!

Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-09-14 09:13 PM


You go girl.Always remember you have the power within you.
Crystal

froggy
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6 posted 2003-09-14 09:23 PM


You tell him SharaRose.

Loved it.

:-)

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-09-14 09:37 PM


wow...  

and thankyou for the e-mail..it as  well appreciated.

M

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-09-14 09:51 PM


Shara, I really like this...the way you wrote
it and the form you used to write it in.
Very good, lady.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-09-14 10:24 PM


no really -- don't hold back -- tell him what you really think... go on!!  

wow -- this has impact

hope you weren't holding anything in your hands when it hit him...

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10 posted 2003-09-14 10:36 PM


Here's a little calesthenic exercise that will help to cure that pain in your neck:

Start by facing your partner, at roughly arm's length, with your feet spread comfortably apart and your weight evenly distributed.

Now, assuming you are right-handed, rotate your shoulders firmly to the right. Get your hips and knees into it and extend your right hand to give extra momentum to the turn.

When you've reached the maximum extension, turned as far as your body will comfortably turn, snap back as quickly as you can toward the left, your right arm still extended..... make sure that hand gets all your energy and speed, and use your partner's face to absorb the momentum.....

Now, turn to the left in the same way......

Repeat this exercise until you feel a sense of resolution, and complete relief from this major pain.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-09-14 10:55 PM


Love the in-your-face attitude!--and the replies you have been receiving!


EA

SharaRose
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12 posted 2003-09-14 11:29 PM


QjQ--Hi Q...It's not like that, but I see people giving their words here about their bad exp's in ex-relationships, allbeit negative emotions theirs aren't criticized, and scrutinized. You understand it's just getting it all out. I appreciate you can see through the words and I'm not violent I'm just hurt so deep by the way this person tells me to "move on" but follows me to every website I go to and says stuff that he knows will hurt me. Cruel things. Rather than just talk about it, settle what his beef is with me and go about our ways. I made mistakes, but so did he. So why does that make him any better? Why can he be forgiven, but I can not?

Magnus--thank you for reading and the comment. I appreciate that you liked the poem.

Kaoru--Thanks for your words, but a job well done would really be if I could get this person to understand, and just talk to me. Communicate. I so much appreciate your comment..I do..I just hope it doesn't come across that I don't with what I've said. I love your writes. Mucho much!

JilGirl--Thank you for your blessings. I so admire your writing if only I could write like you.

Angelblueyes--Thank you for reading and the comment, but really I feel no power in this persons hatred. Power would come in his forgiveness, but he said I'll never get it.

froggy--Thanks froggy. Sometimes this is how I feel. :'(

nakdthoughts--Thanks for your comment, and you are very welcome ..I hope it helped a little. (the email)

garysgirl--Just love ya girl...Thanks, you are always there with a kind word!

Local Rebel--Sir, he doesn't hold back on his cruelties, and lies, and trashings of me. His blatant trashings when all I asked was to talk to him after HE was the one that said HE would always be there for me, and yet I'M the one that did HIM wrong??? And sir I don't hit. I just sink inside. I will leave the hitting to the violent ones. Thank you for the comment---first time you've ever graced one of my comment boxes...Texas is Honored Sir!
Signed,
Southern Belle..sweetheart!

Ratleader-- I'd rather keep trying to pray.

Bless you all bunches...
Much love to the ones that will recieve it,

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-14-2003 11:37 PM).]

SharaRose
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13 posted 2003-09-14 11:34 PM


Thanks Eath Angel.. I came back, and found your comment after I had already thanked all the others. I appreciate you stopping to read, and give your thoughts.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Ratleader
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14 posted 2003-09-15 01:15 AM


......nope, make HIM pray!

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MorninGlory
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15 posted 2003-09-15 01:30 AM


Shara, sounds a bit like a stalker to me, you surely are better off without this guy, hope he gets the message and bugs off.. I can tell you have lots of friends here, they are very supportive.. hopefully that will help you through the rough times. Well written and powerful indeed.

~ becky

SharaRose
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16 posted 2003-09-15 09:48 AM


Thank you Ratleader...I was just blown away that you commented at all. I appreciated that you bothered. He says he doesn't believe in God. I don't think he prays to the same power I do. to you.

Mornin' Glory-- Thank you for your concerned thoughts. It's much appreciated. Bless ya bunches. Big

Love,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

EvocativeVerse2
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17 posted 2003-09-15 10:06 AM


Sock it to him SharaRose. It sounds like you really let him have it. Well done I say.
KristieSue
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18 posted 2003-09-15 10:51 AM


You tell him Shara!  Can I borrow this? LOL

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

SharaRose
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19 posted 2003-09-15 02:03 PM


Thanks girls for reading, and your comments.


EvocativeVerse2-- It doesn't really feel that way. I didn't feel good about this, but sometimes people provoke to do things you normally wouldn't.

Krisite Sue-- I am speechless. I don't know what to say to that. You can borrow, but I hope it doesn't bring to you the hurt I felt that inspired it. I hope not.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mistletoe Angel
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20 posted 2003-09-15 04:50 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yeah, you go girl, point that finger right in front of his eye and let that guilt also pierce him like you had poked his eye! (wipes tears) It saddens me to see so many men emotionless and I would bar myself for life if I ever tried to be like him, I send many angel hugs your way, this would make a very catchy hip-hop song, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Enchantress
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21 posted 2003-09-15 05:04 PM


WoW!  This really packs a punch!
Love the presentation.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

SharaRose
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22 posted 2003-09-15 08:37 PM


Thanks to both of you...

Noah--I just wish he would shake my hand and let it be gone. I will walk away and he will never have to have anything to do with me at all. Shaking hands, and making a resolve is all the shaking I want to do. I just want to live peaceably is all. Love to you for your concern.

Enchantress-- I am glad you liked. Bless ya bunches.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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