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Open Poetry #28

Becoming Weak (A Tanka)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-09-14 05:40 PM

Becoming Weak
~ By Sue ~

I stand all alone
Sometimes I am not so strong
There are many times
I no longer want to try
It seems like a worthless cause

9-14-03

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-09-14 05:49 PM

But you are strong, and are getting more so every day, my friend...there is sadness in this, but it is true feelings, even with the pain....God Bless...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-09-14 05:53 PM

Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-14 05:54 PM

Sweet Sue, this is so real. I'm sorry.

Hugs to you

Ethel

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-09-14 07:17 PM

DearestFriend~
Just when you think you're getting weaker,
is the very time that you will tap into a reserve of strength that is in the heart of you~

Yes ... 'tis true~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-09-14 09:45 PM

I know the feeling Sue..just when you think you have a hold of the world..it breaks loose again

hugs
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-14-2003 09:46 PM).]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-09-14 09:47 PM

This touched my heart.Remember my sweet friend you are strong and you will get stronger everyday.You are an angelic spirit that will always arise to the sweetest of occasions.

Crystal

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Becoming Weak~ By Sue ~I stand all aloneSometimes I am not so strongThere are many timesI no longer want to tryIt seems like a worthless cause9-14-03

Becoming Weak
~ By Sue ~

I stand all alone
Sometimes I am not so strong
There are many times
I no longer want to try
It seems like a worthless cause

9-14-03