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arthur
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

0 posted 2003-09-14 03:29 PM

In pursuit of Ceiwyn

Ceiwyn is my Welsh maid,
As pretty as any ever.
Here,in the woodland glade,
Merry flowers she gathers

Black as night her eyes,
A raven's wing her hair.
Would she were my bride,
This jewel beyond compare.

I completement her charms,
With grace she drops a curtsy.
Then avoids my loving arms,
Her heart,it knows not mercy

My attempts at wooing,
Once more are all in vain.
My love is my undoing,
Rejected once again.

What lover heeds rejection!
I shall try again with flowers
I pursuit of such perfection
Who counts the passing hours?

arthur
as requested !!

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-14 03:37 PM

Ah Micheal...you do seem smitten here!
Enjoyed the read this warm afternoon.
~Hugs across the pond, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-09-14 03:48 PM

Very nice arthur. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2003-09-14 03:53 PM

I am very impressed...

thank you for writing this...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-09-14 03:58 PM

My goodness Arthur , what a beautiful gift for a beautiful Lady . . .
I am smiling HUGE over here
Beautiful writing
xxoo

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-09-14 04:08 PM

Excellent write, yes.. I think the flowers
might do the trick...

maximillian
Junior Member

since 2003-09-13

Posts 23

6 posted 2003-09-14 04:11 PM

Lovely, that's all I can say

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