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In the Garden |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Stories of passion blow like yellow pollen That settle on the calm of my soul’s pool, You step from your robe a flower brazen And I bask in your fragrance like a fool. It is sunset and birds cry in the wind Your porcelain white vase dips in the pond Another flower it contains within, As lilies and lotus float gently on. Surrounding flowers now close for the day Unable to match your wading beauty, The night breeze makes the willow to sway As the last sun beam does finally flee. I light the lanterns giving spheres of light Then calmly I walk off into the night. Gloom |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Prof... I liked this and most particularly the last 2 lines I light the lanterns giving spheres of light Then calmly I walk off into the night. Thanks for the enjoyable read... regards sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fancy leaving all that beauty behind! I love the scent of this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The will to just walk away... Beautiful and sad at the same time. Susan C. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...a lighter shade of gloom...dusk, perhaps... Enjoyed this very much, Professor... |
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