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Forever of a Moment
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Forever of a Moment |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Forever of a Moment She drifted o’er my ivory tower Raining words of magic power Made a moment turn to true From a window with a view Turned a key to see my goal That opened up my very soul Fired up my fantasy And took my hand in ecstasy She made a halo of a glean Placed a phantom on the scene Whispered words of candy rhyme And stopped the clock from ticking time And I was richer with the toll That placed a glow within my soul And in that moment saw forever The crowning point of my endeavor She took a moment levers bend And made a moment never end |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Aw Sy! It is a perfect moment to spend forever in too. I like it. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
And made a moment never end .......... WOW... this is such a fine write... much enjoyed... regards, sudhir |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Your words always flow with a special meaning Enjoyed Gloom |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whispered words of candy rhyme And stopped the clock from ticking time ======================= "she" must read your prophetic poetry ... I'll bet your rhyme scheme dreams set her free.      "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Love those moments lost in time and space and the people who cause them...great writing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
then, life is love...isn't it my friend? Wonderfully viable words |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And I was richer with the toll That placed a glow within my soul And in that moment saw forever The crowning point of my endeavor ~*~ May that crown never slip... Good morning Sy! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You waltz words like no one else~ BEAUTIFUL~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, This is simply lovely for a sunny morn. It makes me remember the way my father used to sign his birthday or anniversary cards to my mother...."love forever and a day". Sighing here with happy tears. Butter tarts with your tea?  hugs, Chris |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, it's been a long time dear man since I've been here in the morn. I've missed having tea with you and reading your prophetic and inspiring words. You are such the master poet. Hugs .... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sy, My first thought when I read this?? God, I hope I make someone feel like that... Great writing... Susan C. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, I like what you said. Sudhir, Thanks for the WOW. Professor, Thank you my friend. JM, Would you like some rock candy? WWRS Kethry Thank you dear, LeeJ, Yes it is, thank you. Sunshine, Good morning love. Marge, You are a sweetheart, Hugs. Chris, Be right there, hugs. NewEnglandlazurlu And you are such a dear, hugs. Susan, You will, you will. Hugs |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sy, this one especially resonated with me -- I admire your artisanship. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I just shared this outstanding romantic poem with my wife. I feel exactly the same way. Thank you, Melton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, Thank you my friend. Melton, I enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Mr. Tumbleweed! May you have countless 'forever- moments'...  Luvs 'n huggums, EA |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Wonderful write as always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel As long as you stay around I will. Thomas119gold Thanks for t he wonderful. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And I was richer with the toll That placed a glow within my soul And in that moment saw forever The crowning point of my endeavor She took a moment levers bend And made a moment never end Seymour, this is so pretty. Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Thank you for liking the poem. |
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