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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Sunday Bits It's what's untold that my body withholds while the darkness consumes and I am chasing the rain ~~*~~ I will wear black searching for the remnants of you feeling that "whisperkiss" of worth when you looked into my eyes ~~*~~ I viewed my life in the hands of you palms up lifting me to a higher plane ~~*~~ From in these walls I peer, these eyes missing what they cannot touch, these hands missing what they cannot comprehend, their willingness put on hold. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Well done, enjoyed. |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
The ever seeking spirit of mankind! The longing for what we feel should be ours! The hopes, desires and needs we all have! You've expressed this well! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hard to go through this, and most definately alone. Sending a   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your bits |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
me too.  loved these. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
loved them,,,, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A Sunday worthwhile of prayer and introspection. These bits of sadness seem surrounded by a love that is special and unending. Reminded me of my sister and I, probably because the fabric of the write was so soft and strong. Thanks M...TD |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Great poem nakdthoughts. I love this line. I will wear black searching for the remnants of you feeling that "whisperkiss" of worth when you looked into my eyes. That just touches my heart. A Whisperkiss...what a lovely image that paints. Well done. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
eeling that "whisperkiss" of worth when you looked into my eyes. *sigh*....whisperkisses sound wonderful... "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Somber and moving. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This moves the heart and touches the soul.  Crystal |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
From in these walls I peer, these eyes missing what they cannot touch..." ~ My favorite part. Enjoyed! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
each tidbit gripping! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
feeling that "whisperkiss" of worth when you looked into my eyes Oh Maureen, just how poetic is that..... a "whisperkiss". Goodness, you know that I love "Whisper" poems..... in fact, I'm fixing to post a whisper rictameter now.  Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-15-2003 02:16 PM).] |
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