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For Her |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
For Her How often may I walk among these sweet Elysian fields, where perfume never meant for men, each fragrant flower yields? How often may I rest my head on heaven's softest cloud and touch the face of innocence that God alone endowed? How often may I feast upon Ambrosia as my due and taste this nectar deep and long 'til hunger's pains are through? How often may a symphony of sound caress my ear, cascading tones of beauty born to worship and revere? How often am I blinded by the brilliance of the dawn, the golden hues of artist's dreams to which my eyes are drawn? The fragrance of Elysian fields lies nestled in her hair, the comfort of the softest cloud, her bosom warm and bare. The nectars of her hidden fruit are mine each time we kiss, her voice a simple symphony, of music tinged in bliss. And when her face I chance to see I sigh and slowly melt, my senses overwhelmed by love I'd dreamed but never felt |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
David William this is a wonderful write! True enchantment and a sweet flow of beauty and love. Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is absolutely beautiful! I haven't had the pleasure of reading your work before, so let me say hello and thanks, for sharing this gem. Hope to read you again. BTW, I'm keeping this one in my library. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-14-2003 10:25 AM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
What a beautiful song your heart sings for your love. Just beautiful!!!  for you two. And thanks for sharing this..it gave my heart a lift to read this morning.   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-14-2003 10:30 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And when her face I chance to see I sigh and slowly melt, my senses overwhelmed by love I'd dreamed but never felt I have felt exactly like this but with his face. M |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A deviation from your sonneteering ways... yet equally as brilliant...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the ending verse pleasure to read you...hope to read more |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Definately nice...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ohhhhh...I want to be her!!! Beautiful.. Susan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...EXQUISITE!!...
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
What beautiful words... enjoyed! ~Tier |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello David Your words left me speechless and breathless and how lucky is the lady these words were written for. Here is one of my favourite quotes I'd like to share with you. "I only wish to be the fountain of love from which you drink, every drop promising eternal passion." Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
I just wanted to thank everyone for the kind comments, they were well appreciated..... Nan, I especially wanted to let you know that I finally took the plunge and submitted various poems of mine to various on line publications. My very first rejection came the very next day! LOL. Anyway thanks again for always being so kind in your remarks. David |
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