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Open Poetry #28

Can I Keep You?

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-09-13 09:22 PM

stop staring
i'm not dead yet
i may be broken
but that doesnt mean i'm no good
pick me up
dust me off
take me home
can i keep you?

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-09-13 09:59 PM

sure..

bah..think I'll keep this myself.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-09-13 10:05 PM

Awwww..:'( This made me want to cry. Ya'll shouldn't do that... make a girl cry.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-13 10:06 PM

Sure you can!
Good write!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-09-13 10:06 PM

Kewl.....know exactly what's happening here! Standing O for saying without saying!

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