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Goddess of the Glaciers
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Goddess of the Glaciers |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Goddess of the Glaciers How dare you breech the sanctity of my isolation, challenge the sacred confines of accepted lonliness and leave me vulnerable to the pain of possibility, Goddess of the Glaciers. Live like it's your last day... Dance like nobody's watching... Love like you've never been hurt... [This message has been edited by bbent (09-15-2003 01:50 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've thought this same exact thing many times and created many avalanches when people got too close |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Now your a psychic as well as a poetess there shadow...I certainly hear you there. Thanks for taking the time to read and your thoughts Live like it's your last day... Dance like nobody's watching... Love like you've never been hurt... [This message has been edited by bbent (09-13-2003 04:47 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well said, Ray...I like the way you did this.  Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ray, I like your poem. I also like your signature lines. That's the way we should all be.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Knowing that you are from Alaska, makes the image of the Goddess of the Glaciers even more powerful!--contrasting with the sense of lonliness and isolation. I too, need my space and down times occasionally. I really enjoyed this piece! EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 g'mornin to ya, RayHope you get my email message.  (Glaciers will get you, every time... thought you learned to stay outta the way?) |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Thanks Vicky...it's actually the verse of a predominatly instumental tune I'm trying to do but gotta admit it does reflect recent events in my life... Thank you Ethel...the signature comes from an old scottish poem I bastardized. Many thanks to you Angel on the shores of forevermore...this is definatly a place of extreems... And of course you Kacy...Yeah you'd think as slow as those big icecubes move one would learn to stay out of the way but some of us are just slow learners and fast forgetters...and dang no email yet but I'll drop you a line soon through the site here, theres also a link to mine from my web page. Live like it's your last day... |
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