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MorninGlory
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since 2003-08-30
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0 posted 2003-09-12 01:15 PM



~

‘Well, gawd-o-giddy,’ my mama used to say,
as she threw her shoe in the dishwater.
‘Uh oh, mama’s mad, let’s get outta the way,
She’s in a dither and gettin’ hotter.’

Now mama didn’t get that mad too often,
well, at least not to that degree,
and the shoe in the sink would soon be forgotten,
then mama was sweet as could be.

Mama knew her temper, she had a heavy hand,
she dared not hit when she was mad.
and if anybody else needed help understandin’,
then maybe they should go ask old dad.

He’d tell anyone who asked about that time
mama slapped him up ‘side the head.
Knocked plum smooth out, he woke up and chimed,
‘You got a brick in your hand, Red?’

So mama wore old shoes at the sink in the kitchen,
just in case she got real good ‘n mad,
she'd sling that ol’ shoe when she’d get her an itchin’
to do what she did to ol’ dad.

~

[This message has been edited by MorninGlory (09-12-2003 01:18 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-09-12 02:08 PM



I'm enjoying your family moments.
Keep it up.  You make them breathe!

JilGirl
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2 posted 2003-09-12 02:11 PM


A most cleverly written cute one!
Enjoyed your humor and wit!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

EvocativeVerse2
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3 posted 2003-09-12 02:57 PM


Great one MorninGlory. I love how you breathed life into mama. You really have quite the talent there. It is nice to see each new chapter that you would reveal. Keep it up! KRM
Endlessecho
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4 posted 2003-09-12 02:58 PM


Wow! Are these characters alive!  very funny and well-written.
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5 posted 2003-09-13 08:25 PM




(giggles in delight Oh my gosh, I just love how you continue to share snippets of your life and characters of your heart with beauty and laughter, sweet friend, oh, he's in for it now this time, hehehe! (kiss on cheek) Your poetry makes our hearts smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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