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Remembering
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Remembering |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I remember white sand beaches cool ocean breezes caressing our skin sweat slick and salty to the tongue I remember racing you to the water daring you to play in the rise and fall of the waves I remember laying next to you watching the suns colours paint the sky and waiting on the moon I rememeber dancing in the dark to the music of the wind bare feeting sliding in the still warm sand I remember your kiss a whisper of what could be a promise, an invitation I remember it all so well even though it was just a fantasy I remember the pain of too soon the pain of not yet And I wonder when you'll ever let it go. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Darn you're good! I keep finding wonderful stuff here. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good to see a new one, Paula... don't disappear again. We don't like that! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Wonderful poem Paula. I love it. Small question? Are you Canadian by birth? Colours? I thought Americans spelled it colors. Of course being Canadian by birth I prefer your spelling! LOL! Wonderful!!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ So good to read your gentle penning~ Hope all is well in your corner of the world~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...well thank you so much...if I inspire you that really makes my day...I don't get ehre as often as I like but its nice to find new faces like yours when I do  Sunshine...aw come on you know I don't ever go far :P school is just keeping me occupied. I miss this place sigh EvocativeVerse2...no I'm from Missouri and I guess its silly but I just like the way the word looks spelled like that...thanks Marge...all is well here just hectic with work and school...trying to maintain my 4.0 so far I have but its a lot of hard work... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice Paula. Susan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...its always nice to have nice memories to remember...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is just lovely, Paula. So good to see you posting, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paula - I remember also those white beaches, closeness under the palms, dancing under the moon, oh yes, I remember then... BC |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hard not to remember something like this -- the experience or the poem. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is definetly worth remembering. Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Paula, I am so happy to see your gorgeous poetry again, sweet friend, though much of this may be fantasy, always cherish your memories to your golden heart and believe much of what you dream to come true! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, congrats on the 4.0 in academics and in this poem. Nice write of what might be. Missouri is a little far from those sandy beaches....but that is what dreams are for. |
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