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Open Poetry #28

Screened ( another view)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-12 10:16 AM

Screened your words
each lie crossing another
until woven tight;
the fullness of hurt
blocking the feelings of love
from reaching you.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-09-12 10:17 AM

ah... now you are getting too close to home... been told I was guilty of hiding behind my own words..lol

nicely done M.. very nice indeed..

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-09-12 10:17 AM

Whoa! I think you hit the bullseye with this, Maureen! Excellent!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-09-12 10:19 AM

if you are guilty of such then I fear there are many more here told the same...

just a little thought that came to mind after reading yours again. I tried to make it a 20 or less...but it would lose something then.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-09-12 10:21 AM

Did I Karilea...to be honest I have a poor aim and have never hit a bullseye ever.

Thanks
hugs
M

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

5 posted 2003-09-12 12:02 PM

an excellent screening, Maureen

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

6 posted 2003-09-12 12:13 PM

Wonderful. Yes I suppose I too hide behind my words...count me guilty.

Opeth
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

7 posted 2003-09-12 12:40 PM

I liked the analogy. Enjoyed!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-09-12 12:42 PM

wonderful work here

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