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the truth behind her smile
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the truth behind her smile |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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a picture was taken years before of a young girl full of love and hope colour in her cheeks glowing but no one saw her the real here behind the smiles she was broken inside unable to tell anyone afraid of letting anyone in she was loved once but she pushed him away so selfish never understood what it meant to be loved never understood she destroyed him she just smiled at parties and family functions but no matter what he was still there waiting for her to change her mind take him in he thought he could save her but he was to late he didnt seem to realize she was already gone... "so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you"-D.C |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus I think your writing about me . . . xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This write is full of pain that reaches right out and grabs your reader. I hope that you have a genuine smile on your face these days that is a reflection of a happier you. Loving, healing hugs, EA |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
 It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so sad. I'm sorry that we looked over your piece of your heart here.  Hugs Ethel  |
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