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Open Poetry #28
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Amature2
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"Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel, has been turned off" author unknown
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1 posted 2003-09-11 05:44 PM

ah.. minimilistic in nature but expands the thought process by allowing the reader to build their own metaphor and apply it to the life they know...and the experiences they have..

Bravo!!!!

another form.. another perspective..and another thought it generated..

thank you..

Well done!
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2 posted 2003-09-11 08:22 PM

bathed in acid rains
and scoured by gritty dust
too weak to be touched
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