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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{And if you look at stars long enough you might find yourself somewhere} How light cradles hollow, empty embraces: here your heart echo's I imagine you the world was frozen: somewhere forgotten in dreams, we learned space without names -- between each season The moon arose I didnt notice {I was} trying to hold something, anything in my hands {fragrance of morning, motion of breathing, the shape of old waves} if wind had knowledge of edges, my dreams would walk in silent tips Here at the center the deepest part I claimed forever in answer to the sea and the rain soaked earth -- who remembers how to listen over dark arches and cold stone? The shore was l o n g I paused enough to drink air I could not see there, a place inside of you, amber of memory so unheard words might cross these lips The way you move me I walk with your shadow With your silhouette Leave the light on It always comes Back to you [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (09-11-2003 12:31 PM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh Lauren, I think this is stunning!!! You know, I told you once that you wrote with a grace and beauty that flows as a silken river, and I say now that it has even become more so...much enjoy your talent, my friend...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good penning,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes You have stopped the wind to light a candle.  Lovely |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many ways in which to read your poetry... you carve them so delicately... Thank you, Lauren. It's been awhile. Welcome home. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Nice to read you, as it's been too long.. Very sensual, and beautiful. Susan |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your words breathe so lovingly and grace the page with the softest touch. Love the way you do this lady Lauren~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ You write so gracefully~ Each penning a treat~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So soft..so delicate..so you. You have been missed...thank you for sharing this piece with us. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
damn.... thank you |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I thought this flowed swiftly perhaps too swifty i wanted more  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... left wanting more ... ALWAYS *S |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I've read this thing 6 times now... and I'm still without enough words to make sense of what I need to say |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! (does happy dance) Oh Lauren, I'm so happy you're back, sweet friend, I have missed your gorgeous and picturesque poetry sooooooo much! (kiss on cheek) I imagined the lovely river as a mirror and you can see all your prized memories in amber, like they are preserved in pure honey, yay, this is a classic, I'm adding this to my angel library, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, I'm with Sy and it has been a while. But then I can never get enough of your writing.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
{And if you look at stars long enough you might find yourself somewhere} How light cradles hollow, empty embraces: here your heart echo's I imagine you the world was frozen: somewhere forgotten in dreams, we learned space without names -- between each season The moon arose I didnt notice {I was} trying to hold something, anything in my hands {fragrance of morning, motion of breathing, the shape of old waves} if wind had knowledge of edges, my dreams would walk in silent tips Here at the center the deepest part I claimed forever in answer to the sea and the rain soaked earth -- who remembers how to listen over dark arches and cold stone? ====================================== next to the words ethereal, exquisite, exceptional, grace, serene, seductive, sanctuary and poetess in the dictionary....they need only place your picture for your writing defines them all. Have missed you me lovely butterfly girlie.  "When your own emptiness is all thats gettin thru |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
if wind had knowledge of edges, my dreams would walk in silent tips wonderful lines, Lauren. A beautiful poem Maureen |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Again Greeneyes shows us how it's done. Thank you for sharing both, the poem and the lesson. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
yes... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Memories, held fast in amber...Wow! and this! "{fragrance of morning, motion of breathing, the shape of old waves}" Captured thus. Goodness! Ed |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful read greeneyes. I could picture that in my mind. :-) |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is a stunning write. Crystal |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Almost every time I read your poetry, it reminds me of the style of lyrics of my favorite band. Simply put, beautifully written. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
post more we beg of you |
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