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Open Poetry #28
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ptwils165
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since 2002-11-29
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0 posted 2003-09-11 09:44 AM


I take the covers
off a bed
of lies and shyness
fumbling to flick the nib
of a night-scribe

Lamplight
risks everything,
curving soft shadows -
taking the edge
off my words

I listen to the breathing
while your name
in five letters
cries on the shoulder
of the darkness.
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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-09-11 09:47 AM

very nice,,,

                   
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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2 posted 2003-09-11 09:51 AM

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!
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