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When? Begin |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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I wonder, just when Did this one life begin When a one in a million Unseeing swimmer Bumped into and boarded That one lonely ovum Or, could it have been When I emerged squawking From the aegis of heaven To that of my mother Or perhaps, in a mirror When I first saw, I saw What was in there Was me Then, again, Was it when I learned, I could learn To start over again |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) Depends on how you define this life.... good to read you of late and with the elements of hope in your words of late... it is my hope yours find reality... nicely done Ed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Indeed..a question most of us have pondered over our years here on earth. So many answers to this question.. Depends I guess on the individual and their belief.. Well done poet sir. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Every new day unfolds a wonder. That's why I always read you. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
great job... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
We are reborn again and again, and always have another chance - grace abounds. Always nice to 'pick a day' and start all over. I like your style. ~ becky |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
For me, the last... *S* I'm just hoping this one can continue... some things are meant to be left behind... others take a toll. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Some deep thoughts, my friend! Is it ever too late? I wonder. Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx The first question usually starts everything. LOL |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are so thought provoking.....indeed always a pleasure... hugssssLauren~ The way you move me |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I am in awe Not of life, itself but the wondrous ability of the heart It is but an organ pumping life to limb creating breath sharing itself so freely never asking for anything It is this creation bled from above and beyond woven tapestry of many lives lived knotted into one regenerating itself at the exact time and space so rarely witnessed welcoming new breath and blood |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks everyone, for the kind replies and for taking the time. It's appreciated! And Susie? This, "It is this creation bled from above and beyond woven tapestry of many lives lived knotted into one regenerating itself at the exact time and space so rarely witnessed welcoming new breath and blood" Is perhaps what I meant to say.  Thank you Sweety"In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhh you said much better than I ever could  your welcome sweety |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Geez, I love it when I come back to see inspiration building upon perspiration...  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
And the beauty continues... Love this, Ed... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
beginnings an endings....endings and beginnings....that's what life is. nicely done, Ed.... |
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