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ecrivan
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0 posted 2003-08-05 09:23 PM



Suggestive of cures to halt a malady's success
preventive means to malt the brew in progress

A lotion applied to keep the dryness away
A potion prescribed to let the pleasure stay

Tissues ask that their essential oils remain
Fixtures tasked to prevent potential strains

preventive conflict stikes any given day
and oppressive orders are meant to stay
if only to keep struggles in check were as much sincere,
as to accept national diversities...
come to grips with real conflicts to fear

Trials and errors pose at regular refrains
Medicinal doses quantify usual pain
  
Induced by parassitic enclaves at nation posts,
promoted by market racketeers or talkative hosts

Do we live in a preventive manner
or live in substantial manor?

Is this the manor that was meant to be
or is it the manner of preventive needs?



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-06-2003 08:40 PM).]

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Saunni
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1 posted 2003-08-05 09:50 PM


Excellent!! Wonderful!!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-08-05 10:26 PM


Great write!
Eric

ecrivan
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3 posted 2003-08-06 01:15 AM


lots of meaning,as always..thanks


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4 posted 2003-09-20 12:18 PM



Nan
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5 posted 2003-09-21 07:26 AM


You know I love a good double entendre - This is excellent - as usual, m'friend...
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6 posted 2003-09-28 03:48 AM


ah....yes...a fine write
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