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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-11 05:09 AM

Hush
little
spider on my
window..
how you're
hanging on
to a
streak of
web
that isn't there.

Do I imagine
tiny voice
halt in
name,
salted wound
you have claimed..

...my sill,
framed in
silk
cross
stitch echos.

Soft spider,
in jar..
I could take
your
oxygen..

But
in need of your
breath..

will you
escape my grasp,
no board of pin
could keep you locked in..
build a web,
decieve me..

Crawl up
tinted legs
of eight,
feel the meaning
must we walk..
such grace, tainted
grace...

The length between
each woven spring,
you have
tick tocked the season
later than
a reaching shadow..
caused my leaf..

As wandering is
a means
of transportation..

You be gone
when day breaks
and holds me at bay..

I cannot
stop the
hushing of you
spider..
The whisper that
you trail
as you walk.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-11 05:39 AM

nice penning,,,
enjoyed the read,,

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

2 posted 2003-09-11 06:19 AM

Wonderful wonderful poem. Thanks 4 posting it.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2003-09-11 08:15 AM

Sounds a bit restless ...
     another long night?

  I wonder if this spider maybe the night and its web designed to catch your every dream?

  If 'tis the case ... I say recapture your dreams and tame the spider!

        Your dreams are far from over.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-09-11 09:00 AM

Crawl up
tinted legs
of eight,
feel the meaning
must we walk..
such grace, tainted
grace...

The length between
each woven spring,
you have
tick tocked the season
later than
a reaching shadow..
caused my leaf..

As wandering is
a means
of transportation..

You be gone
when day breaks
and holds me at bay..

I cannot
stop the
hushing of you
spider..
The whisper that
you trail
as you walk.

Bravo!!!!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-09-11 09:02 AM

"how you're
hanging on
to a
streak of
web
that isn't there"

Yep..I tend to do that...

But oh Meg...I hate spiders...they scare me..

Excellent job!

Susan

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2003-09-11 12:01 PM

Damn... you, Wind and I are all writing awesome spider poems of late.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2003-09-11 01:01 PM

Spiders are cool. ANd this poem was great.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-09-11 01:05 PM

Meghan~
The word-artistry in this piece is amazing~
Another BRAVO !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2003-09-11 01:13 PM

Absolutely lovely!!!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

10 posted 2003-09-11 01:15 PM

Bravo! This I just had to read as I was listening to the Alice Cooper song Black Widow at the moment. I love it. Wonderfully penned. Thank-you so very very much. This is a keeper for sure.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-09-11 03:10 PM

Felt like a dream-sequence, Meghan...
and choreographed exceptionally well.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-09-11 04:06 PM

awesome meggsies

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

13 posted 2003-09-11 04:31 PM

meg...just when i think i have read your best...you post something new...i am always in awe of you and PROUD to be able to say...i know you...helen

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