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Open Poetry #28

Amazing Maze

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-10 09:24 PM

walk this maze with me,

i dare the athiests,
me among them,
humbled below her gaze -

tell me -
if she is not the creator,
then how?

september is a swan song,
an autumn melody of a
beaming sun wrapping
the shivering trees,

my feet, muddy and deep
in earth's fall covers,
sweep the ground she blessed,

and heaven is a field
drenched in eternity,
filling a once barren heart,

come the harvest moon tonight,

exquisite and stark,
breathless seduction,

life and death lure me
in this holy field
where corn was conceived and born

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-10-2003 10:54 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-10 09:47 PM

very good pennning,, Lady Poetess

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-09-10 09:54 PM

"come the harvest moon tonight,

exquite and stark,
breathless seduction,

life and death lure me
in this holy field
where corn was conceived and born"

Beautiful Michele....simply beautiful.
And yes, the moon is spectacular tonight.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-10 10:15 PM

Excellently penned and the moon looks most wonderful tonight.

Crystal

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-09-10 10:40 PM

I see your gypsy soul . . .
God I adore this Michele

my feet, muddy and deep
in earth's bare cover
sweeping the ground she blessed,

Beautiful song . . .
xxoo

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-09-11 09:44 PM

Nicely done as usual.... sorry for being redundant!

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

6 posted 2003-09-11 10:17 PM

The "Harvest Moon" inspired me to write, too.

Truly a breath taking sight ...!

Great read here, Lady.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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