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END OF A RELATIONSHIP
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END OF A RELATIONSHIP |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Stress, Blissful stress helped us to split. Trust me there wont be any Spartacus like speeches to revive us. Like a pensioner stabbing a youth to death out of fear, We frequently stop to share cold stares filled with daggers. As the air cools in the early evening, so does our love. I always had to curtsy to earn your respect. Our relationship was always deemed unsafe to be sheltered in. The only spotlight I was ever under was that of the lonely moon. Forever, trying to think of a question for your answer. Still escape is never that easy. Running away like a kid without a care in the world, I trip and stumble. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mercury . . . this is astounding! bittersweet, yet beautiful writing excellent job, friend (keep em spaced closer) This reads just fine though xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is good.You can feel the bitterness but you can also feel the ehart in this.Keep going.  Crystal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, many do end...with or without our approval...James |
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