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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-09-10 03:01 AM




~~*~~
The sounds of our dreams
gently dancing
in our thoughts
softly whispering
to our minds
of our
plans

Plans of our future life
together with each other

We talk softly of our plans
as softly as
the sounds of
the wind
and of the
gentle waves
splashing
in water

Words of love, sounding soft
yet they are as clear as
the skies on a warm
summer night
with stars
sparkling
in brilliance of
light, as glimmering
diamonds

Heard as clear, are
the sounds of our dreams
as they are heard through
our minds as
whispers
gently dancing
in our
thoughts
~~*~~



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-13-2003 07:13 AM).]

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-09-10 03:05 AM



"Words of love, sounding soft
yet they are as clear as
the skies on a warm
summer night
with stars
sparkling
in brilliance of
light, as glimmering
diamonds"

Simply beautiful...as always.

Hugs to you, lady...

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-10 03:32 AM


fabulous,,,,

                

Nan
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3 posted 2003-09-10 07:47 AM


...Sweet sounds, indeed...

ShannonMarie
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4 posted 2003-09-10 07:59 AM


I really liked this one,.. it made me feel warm like I was there.  good job.
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-09-10 08:08 AM


garysgirl
Is that you in the picture? Beautiful

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-09-10 08:42 AM


Ethel:

you have no idea just how beautifully this spoke to me this lovely morning:

We talk softly of our plans
as softly as
the sounds of
the wind
and of the
gentle waves
splashing
in water

I do believe . . . I am a happy woman
thank you
xxoo

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-09-10 08:47 AM


You and Gary look wonderful in this photo!--mind you, I'm still partial to the pics of you two on those adorable his and her icons you sometimes use!

Ethel Mae, this poem is beyond l-o-v-e-r-l-y!

to two very special sweethearts!

Linda

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8 posted 2003-09-10 10:06 AM


Excellent poem garysgirl. I could hear the sounds within my mind. This is eloquent beyond words. Thank-you for the read.
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9 posted 2003-09-10 04:35 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is sooooooo cute and precious, sweet friend, and very soon may you and Gary finally be together and hear the heartbeats of love serenade you to sleep always! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-09-10 04:42 PM


This is so lovely it sounds pretty to me. I just love this...just makes me want to huggggggggggggg forever, and ever.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Jason Lyle
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11 posted 2003-09-10 04:59 PM


Beautiful words...


Jason

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12 posted 2003-09-10 07:34 PM


nice
Rdz9
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13 posted 2003-09-10 10:41 PM


Aye, beautiful... Live well and be true to your heart and soul.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

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14 posted 2003-09-10 10:43 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, just like the love you two share.
Crystal

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15 posted 2003-09-13 06:31 AM


Vicky
Glenn
Nan
ShannonMarie
Seymour
Sue
Linda
EvocativeVerse
Noah
SharaRose
Jason
Vandana
Rdz9
Crystal
.
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I thank all of you for your sweet replies I'm sorry that I haven't responded to your replies before now, but I've been sick with bronchitis. I really do appreciate all of you for reading and replying to my poems. You are all a great encouragement to me.
Love and Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-13-2003 06:32 AM).]

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