Open Poetry #28 |
Whispering Sounds Of Our Dreams |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
~~*~~ The sounds of our dreams gently dancing in our thoughts softly whispering to our minds of our plans Plans of our future life together with each other We talk softly of our plans as softly as the sounds of the wind and of the gentle waves splashing in water Words of love, sounding soft yet they are as clear as the skies on a warm summer night with stars sparkling in brilliance of light, as glimmering diamonds Heard as clear, are the sounds of our dreams as they are heard through our minds as whispers gently dancing in our thoughts ~~*~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-13-2003 07:13 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Words of love, sounding soft yet they are as clear as the skies on a warm summer night with stars sparkling in brilliance of light, as glimmering diamonds" Simply beautiful...as always. Hugs to you, lady... If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous,,,,
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...Sweet sounds, indeed... |
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ShannonMarie Member
since 2003-09-09
Posts 55in a state of being |
I really liked this one,.. it made me feel warm like I was there. good job. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Is that you in the picture? Beautiful |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel: you have no idea just how beautifully this spoke to me this lovely morning: We talk softly of our plans as softly as the sounds of the wind and of the gentle waves splashing in water I do believe . . . I am a happy woman thank you xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You and Gary look wonderful in this photo!--mind you, I'm still partial to the pics of you two on those adorable his and her icons you sometimes use! Ethel Mae, this poem is beyond l-o-v-e-r-l-y! to two very special sweethearts! Linda |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Excellent poem garysgirl. I could hear the sounds within my mind. This is eloquent beyond words. Thank-you for the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is sooooooo cute and precious, sweet friend, and very soon may you and Gary finally be together and hear the heartbeats of love serenade you to sleep always! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is so lovely it sounds pretty to me. I just love this...just makes me want to huggggggggggggg forever, and ever. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful words... Jason |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Aye, beautiful... Live well and be true to your heart and soul. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is absolutely beautiful, just like the love you two share. Crystal |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky Glenn Nan ShannonMarie Seymour Sue Linda EvocativeVerse Noah SharaRose Jason Vandana Rdz9 Crystal . . I thank all of you for your sweet replies I'm sorry that I haven't responded to your replies before now, but I've been sick with bronchitis. I really do appreciate all of you for reading and replying to my poems. You are all a great encouragement to me. Love and Hugs to each of you Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-13-2003 06:32 AM).] |
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