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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-09-09 11:15 PM

Up the Down Staircase

You know,
I was just thinking about
Up the down stair case
and what it might mean.
Going in opposite directions,
well that comes through quite keen.
Like ants, we all going to, and fro
like a busy infection,
and the population
just grows, and grows.
To retailers delection.
I think it's just the rat race
A mixture of every kind of face
going at a hurried pace
in
this..
The Human
race.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-09 11:17 PM

yes it certainly seems that way at times,,

enjoyed your penning,, lady poetess

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-09 11:20 PM

Thanks Q...

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

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Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-09 11:25 PM

This is so true.We should slow down on that staircase and take some time to notice who's coming and going.Well penned my friend.

Crystal

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-09-09 11:30 PM

Thanks Crystal.

I have a question. I don't feel this is complete, or finished. ...Where can I go to get suggestions? Also can I change this, and re-submit? I just feel this is about half done.

Thanks,
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angelblueyes
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Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-09 11:56 PM

SharaRose: Yes you can always rewrite it or add to it or take away and resubmit it.That's what this forum is for.As for advice I'm not sure but I think there might be a place in tech talk and I know there's some workshop places in here, but I can't remember where.Also you can leave a post under this for help and I'm sure you'll get plenty of replies.

Crystal

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
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6 posted 2003-09-11 06:11 PM

One of my favorite books.Great movie too.

paladin

....a knight without armor

SharaRose
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7 posted 2003-09-15 09:57 PM

Cool...I knew I had heard those words somewhere. It was a VERY long time ago though. That is for sure, because it was when I was very young.
Thanks for the read, and comment...

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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