navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » for my husband
Open Poetry #28
Post A Reply Post New Topic for my husband Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ShannonMarie
Member
since 2003-09-09
Posts 55
in a state of being

0 posted 2003-09-09 12:10 PM



Dear husband mine, how can I show,
My love for you, I’ve come to know?

Your warm and tender, loving touch,
Still lingers after fingers brush;
As in the days of long ago,
Still sparks ignite my passions so.

Your laugh … sweet music to my ears
Can always ease my tender tears;
A voice that echoes through my heart,
Records the love that never shall part.

Your gentle eyes that sparkle so,
Light up my sight in after-glow;
One furtive glance across the room,
Can make this heart still sigh and swoon.

Your smile and silent, knowing glance,
Devour me, with sweet romance;
A love that lets my spirit soar,
Beyond the skies for evermore.

Though grains of sand may trickle time,
Our love is endless … husband mine.

© Copyright 2003 Shannon Marie - All Rights Reserved
ShannonMarie
Member
since 2003-09-09
Posts 55
in a state of being
1 posted 2003-09-09 12:16 PM


please respond... I want to hear what people think of my writings.  thank you
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-09-09 08:45 PM


An excellent way to show it is to appreciate him...and as this poem reveals you certainly are doing that...nice writing...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » for my husband

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary