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A Twisted Rogue
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A Twisted Rogue |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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My heart is twisted unknown to me why I feel the coil tighten almost as if I might die Winding together all the strands of my life as they pass before my eyes interlocking to the point of breaking The contortion is beyond the daily norm each intertwined piece a part of me good, bad and even ugly what can I do my heart is squeezed between two Love is supposed to be a blending not a repeating ride taking all I know and circling with lies revolving into this spiral when will I realize That the twist and turns need to be taken in stride true love will balance what I feel inside showing me how to undo the knots that have formed and uncurl each one, as time will allow Until then I slide with the spiraled strands in my chest-unknowing if it will be for the best I will simple have to guess if I truly will always be a twisted mess |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A twisted mess? No I don't think you will risk this to last, as you know "that true love will balance what you feel inside" ... Very powerful words...sprinkled with wisdom. Love, Margherita  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
well expressed write,,, |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank you both so much I wanted to try something in my poems and just was not sure what would come out of it |
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