Open Poetry #28 |
lovers happen |
Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I’m thinking of taking a lover and it could be you maybe we could live together as two I know that it sounds too simple and likely so impossible to you But I have no rules I don’t need them and I’m telling you we wouldn’t need them in the silence of a moment I get it lovers cannot be taken or made... lovers happen |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Love is all around, but everyone has a different definition of love. Good write. |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
yeah I agree, they do just happen! (and half the time you dont even realise) Well put. Connie. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"lovers cannot be taken or made... lovers happen" ~ and may it happen for you in the most soul and heart-fulfilling way! Here's to love & loving! Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
in the silence of a moment I get it lovers cannot be taken or made... lovers happen How true!! And sometimes when you least expect it!! Hugs Ethel |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I love this poem. And it's true lovers DO just happen. I hope it happens in a most positive and wonderful way for you. Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lovers cannot be taken or made... lovers happen absolutely, this is great and btw we're still waiting on that picture..grins |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully written and much enjoyed! ~smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kahlil - yes, they just happen. The question is when? BC |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Yes they do happen.Sometimes it takes longer than other. Crystal |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Mercury: It's the definitions that make it so good gringakiwi: yup. is it springtime there now? thanks for your comments. Linda; thank you, hmmmm, more cd ocean sounds, please... garysgirl: thank you. I love your quote..who said it, you or ? Aenimal: this IS my picture ;-) that's it! hee hee But thanks for responding to my poem! You're a funny guy....love your wit Enchantress: Somehow I knew I'd capture you're interest in a write about lovers, now why is that???? Bill: We never know when...usually at a time we stop waiting or having expectations, and then the beauty comes out of the blue. Love ya'll, I'm so happy to have heard from you! ~K~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Oh man, I messed up my comments... garysgirl: I meant to say I like the part you mentioned, when we least expect it! And it was of teen poet I meant to ask where the quote "Let go of your concept of reality..." came from? I like it! I guess I was overwhelmed at the response to my write. Thanks everyone. |
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ShannonMarie Member
since 2003-09-09
Posts 55in a state of being |
lovers do just happen, I've been there. Good job! ~Shannon Marie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kahlil: oh you have such insight: lovers cannot be taken or made... lovers happen truly beautiful xxoo |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I've heard it said, "Life is what happens while you're making other plans"...Love also seems to happen while making other plans! When we quit planning for Love, and quit seeking so absolutely for Love, it comes quietly in, and....happens... If Love is meant to be, it will become... enjoyed.. hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Shannon: thank you for your comment! littlewing: insight...hmmm, every now and then I have a ta-dah moment! haha! thank you! xo dgvarner: you are right and we need to remember that when we get impatient. Thank you so much! |
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