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Questioning The Tidal Patience Of Awareness
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Questioning The Tidal Patience Of Awareness |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Did you ever walk an early beach and try to catch the morning, it's just a seashell out of reach. Did you ever walk an early beach? The waves can always teach their subtle signs of karmic warning; did you ever walk an early beach and try to catch the morning? ©2003 by icebox |
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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
first of all, i love the title of this poem. second of all, i love the poem itself and really connect with it. yes, i have walked an early beach... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and at a starry tide place where it can start come take a tender ride if you can catch its heart this beat is a gentle view if you can just believe is it something you can do to accept what you receive |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh myyy...this gave me goosebumps! The good kind. Loving this I am...simply loving it m'friend. Into my library of keepers. ~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Between the poem and reply from h I think it's galringly obvious that you two must write a duet..nuff said |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Yes, and thank you for reminding me |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great read, and I second the motion for a duet. Jason |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
when grey turns into soft pink you hold your breath while the sea gives birth to the sun and you suddenly own a brand new day, joyously aware of the gift. Your beautiful words are inspiring! Love, Margherita  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
it could only be by the ocean...and perhaps maybe in the mountains..that one could hope to witness it... I did see it on the Chesapeake Bay... one can not catch it..but if one is blessed they can walk in the tides of it..and feel its breeze. Seems we are on the same "wavelength"  Ive been begging me muse for something along this idea for days now...we will see how it all falls. loved the title too, poet sir. "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn damn damn! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
When morning births a new day Comes a new start for each A new beginning, a new leaf New chances, mapping out our way Morning air On mother Earths watery pallette Giving way to sweet release. Oh sweet morning, seashells adorning Bring me your serenity, and your peace! I love the beach in the morning. Fresh new day, and beauty as far as the eye can see. What a treasure this write is. I love this. Thanks for teaching us how to catch the morning!!! So pretty. Lovely feeling I was left with after reading!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Oh back to the top with this..quick..tis beyoootiful. and yes, the title, poetry in itself!  gem xxxxxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh yes... Thank you for the memories that this has awakened. Simply beautiful. "My friends are my estate." |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I feel like she already used the word damn for at least three of us.. but, damn..anyway. |
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