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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tomorrows Tomorrows with joy To erase yesterdays pain I will make for you.  believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
scorpio - few words, much meaning and thought. Nice write... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Scorpio~Beautiful..the words, the daisies.. which happen to be my favourite flower.  You have been missed here at Passions. Please say you're here to stay now.. Love the sentiment within this piece. ~Soft Smiles & Warm Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Sy...your support means much to me.. Bill, I'm glad you stopped by and commented...thank you.. Nancy, thank you for your kind and warm words...and yes, I'll start to contribute here again...you inspire me sweet Enchantress.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Library...  |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Short but sweet |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So that is what you have been doing!--being a beautiful and romantic soul writing exquisite bits of poetry!   EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Mercury... Linda, you flatter me...but thanks .. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
it takes but a few well chosen words to convey so much ..and in this a depth of feeling, a desire to indeed make those days for someone better... nicely done Scorp... always have been a fan of the short verse forms... you do them well. |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
This says so much! So very much. How wonderful. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You bring much happiness in so few words, and they are endearing and sweetly said. Much enjoyed Scorpio~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
High praise coming from a man whose words have inspired me...thank you Ron.. I appreciate your kind words, Endlessecho Thank you, BluesSerenade...I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This touched my heart in such few words, that it's going right into the library.Thanks Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww this is such a beautiful and faithful vow, sweet friend, she is so lucky to have a wonderful, gentle and caring person as you to hold her hand along the way, God Bless You, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Crystal, thank you for stopping by and commenting... Thank you, Noah...your support is much appreciated.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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