Open Poetry #28 |
Hey Pretty Girl |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Do you look When you know you shouldn’t see? Do you go Places where you shouldn’t be? Will you only for the bad guy That just makes you sad and cry? Do the tattoos attract you Or is it the rough beard he wears, Is it his crude manner Or that he really doesn’t care? Why do you walk by And never let me catch your eye When his cruelty brings you down And in your own tears you drown, Is it because I’m clumsy and can’t dance That you never give me a chance? Is it the I don’t watch your favorite TV show That I can’t find the hip places to go Am I just too old Or not quite bold, So instead of another cry Can’t you just pretend I’m the bad guy? Gloom |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Aszard...she must be insane to pass you by..bad guys stink...who wants to be hip anyway? not meeeee. I'm happy being a geek. good to read you, as always Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
oh yessss...you ARE... a very bad boy...h |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've never figured out that chemistry...although I know from watching life that it's truly there...perhaps it's the rebellion that "all good girls cannot admit to" that they see falling out of the guy you described... Whatever... I know that you pinpointed it quite well, Professor - but then, that is your signature...pinpointing things well... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, gemjop, You are very kind, I agree, I don’t mind geeky Thank you, 1slick_lady, But I’m a different type of bad I’m the bad that doesn’t attract the women. Gloom |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Sunshine, Pleased you enjoyed Perhaps that is my lot in life A pinpoint in the darkness Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Enjoyed this very much. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Seymour, Pleased you enjoyed And you are lucky, I understand you already have a pretty girl Of your own. Gloom |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hummmm There is a mistaken generality that the majority of society falls for, the false assumption that men with tattoos and who ride motorcycles are bad boys and need to be avoided or are somehow more thrilling than the 'good' boys. It is hype, of course, but it makes for a decent poem once in a while. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
likes a man with a big...brain!!! |
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