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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2003-09-08 10:54 AM



Face in the mirror
memory sweet memory
picture perfect past.

Lines in the mirror
refraction of haunted eyes
that can't be my face.

Truth in the mirror
tales of pain and harmony
fogged by what we do.

Face in the mirror
can't hide from what is seen there
life turned inside out.


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-09-08 11:28 AM


Paula,
Well done enjoyed.  


Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-09-08 12:14 PM


nice
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-09-08 04:13 PM


Paula - at times it's amazing what one sees in the mirror...

BC

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-09-08 05:54 PM


liked this, very different.
the ending made me think...keeping this

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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