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Open Poetry #28

Faces In The Mirror

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2003-09-08 10:54 AM

Face in the mirror
memory sweet memory
picture perfect past.

Lines in the mirror
refraction of haunted eyes
that can't be my face.

Truth in the mirror
tales of pain and harmony
fogged by what we do.

Face in the mirror
can't hide from what is seen there
life turned inside out.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-09-08 11:28 AM

Paula,
Well done enjoyed.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-09-08 12:14 PM

nice

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-09-08 04:13 PM

Paula - at times it's amazing what one sees in the mirror...

BC

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-09-08 05:54 PM

liked this, very different.
the ending made me think...keeping this

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